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Saturday, October 6th 2007

11:11 PM

Typed Pages for Guilty Growing...Slowly

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Today was my second day of transcribing Guilty from handwritten to typed pages.  The outlook is grim so far for word count total.  I'm currently at 98 typed pages, or 24,500 words, with only 10 handwritten pages left in the first composition notebook to transcribe.  At this rate, I have roughly a 50K story instead of the 80K bare minimum that I need to submit to the three lines I am aiming for.  Sigh.  Not good.

I do plan to go back and really build on the brothers' relationship with more friendly scenes at the beginning to show their original closeness.  And I could possibly add in another scene or two during the deterioration stage to show how badly things have gotten and how tense the situation is at their house while they compete for Kerri.  This should help a bit, maybe add on 5-7K.  I could also show one of Kerri's nightmares in depth to add suspense, show her stress, and add another 2-3K there if done right.  And I could show another date or two during the competition stage to show the inconsistencies instead of doing a summary about them as I currently have it, which might add another 5-7K.  I'll still be short 10K though. 

I can't BELIEVE I'm falling short on word count!!!  This has got to be a real first for me...and it's horrifying!  MUCH easier to cut than to add!  Yeek and urp (or should that be "gulp"?).

More later,

Sav

 

21 Comment(s).

Posted by Michelle Lauren:

Hey Savannah, Don't be down on yourself about word count. I'm doing that too. I entered NanoWriMo unofficially and I'm trying to juggle that with a lot of my other responsibilities. You might not remember me. I was an Editor at Cobblestone Press under the name Michelle Foxe (we worked together on MDG: Book 1). I also wanted to let you know I posted a thumbnail of that book my blog (www.lovebitesforever.blogspot.com). I had a great experience working with you and the book is still selling, so yay! Stop by my blog to say hi when you get a chance.
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Long time, no speak, huh? *smile*
I just wanted to let you know that I "officially" tagged you for one of those "6 Random Things About You" posts on my blog. Here is the link to the post.

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